My eyes are still wet from the last time I shed,
My hands are still warm from the touch of your skin,
And you’re already off committing your next sin.
Some nights sleep eludes me,
And my eyes close to a rising sun,
All this while a thought torments me,
What if my heart gave the right love to the wrong one?
A wanderer, A loner,
People think Ive lost my way ,
These rooted trees wouldn’t understand,
There’s no one place I want to stay.
Post Scriptum: This poem has been composed by my friend Suyash Srivastava and is third in the series Lost without you. A wonderful writer, I wish him all the best for the future.
It’s great.
Hey, i would appreciate it, if you could go thru my blog: thatlyricistguy.wordpress.com/2018/01/22/the-path/
It’s my first try, please lemme know in comments, how it is!
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Thanks a lot.
Will surely visit.
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I too wish Suyash all the very Best
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I’ll convey your regards 😊
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Excellent!!!!
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Thanks for reading 😊
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Wow! What a riveting and intriguing poem! Wow!
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Thanks for your wonderful wishes 😊
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You’re welcome always! 😇
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Have you listened to my audio post ?
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Have you listened to my audio post?
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Not yet. Will surely listen
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✨❤️🙂
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Did you listen or just hit the “like” button
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I listened to it. I found it soothing 😊
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Thanks
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Did you like what i said about you
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Nice…
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Thanks a lot
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you are welcome…:-)
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I like you Himanshi but now I’m sure that you don’t read what i write. You just click “liked” as you clicked on the audio post without even listening to it. I won’t give you the link ’cause you already liked it.
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No I listened to an instrumental and I thought that was what you were referring to. Next when you asked me whether I liked what you said about me, then I rechecked your posts and found the actual audio post. I didn’t read any big posts due to lack of time yesterday but yes I did go through your inspirational posts.
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Excellent
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Thanks a lot
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My absolute pleasure
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Thanks for following my blog . your poem is very thought provoking and flows in serenity with meanings hidden but explicite.
READ MY BLOGS/POEMS AND LEAVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS
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Thanks 😊
Will do that for sure
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welcome always
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